Saturday, February 12, 2011
Group Collaboration
Katie and Sean, I haven't changed anything much since we discussed our body paragraphs except that I changed one of my concrete details to "Nothing will induce me to part with Bunbury, and if you ever get married, which seems to me extremely problematic, you will be very glad to know Bunbury. A man who marries without knowing Bunbury has a very tedious time of it." My other quote is : "Divorces are made in heaven." I am just debating what I should use for my third quote, if either of you have any ideas let me know. I am going to get some ideas down for our transitions between our paragraphs, and I will either post them on your blogs or e-mail tomorrow. So make sure that we are still focusing our paragraphs around the character Algernon, that way it all goes nicely together. Also, any ideas for nice transitions? Comment or e-mail me them.
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I found a few quotes like, "Marry a woman, and at the end of a week you'll find no more inspiration in her than in a plate of muffins" or "Good heavens! Is marriage so demoralising as that?" For your transition issue, i recommend double checking everything, and if you see a transition needing improvement, do so, and make it a stronger and more understandable paragraph to read. Hopefully that helps.
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